tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8407679229975998493.post7382644122498521809..comments2024-03-28T06:24:25.829-06:00Comments on The Quivering Pen: Fobbit update: "And here...we...go!"David Abramshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06013514596973186440noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8407679229975998493.post-11572611020254713392011-11-02T15:32:40.114-06:002011-11-02T15:32:40.114-06:00. . . totally excited for you, DA! . . . see your .... . . totally excited for you, DA! . . . see your way through these re-writes and make it sing, brother!jonathan evisonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8407679229975998493.post-49758427211645580702011-11-02T14:38:32.504-06:002011-11-02T14:38:32.504-06:00I'm listening to Matterhorn. It's good but...I'm listening to Matterhorn. It's good but the actual plot is sparse. Then again, literary novels rarely have any at all. Identify with the main character and a reader will follow them anywhere. That's the trick. And stay in the same tense.Markhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15222366707246731960noreply@blogger.com